Bronze Door Knobs

Hows this sound for the beginning of my story? Ideas?
What this could not make a good story? i wrote a single paragraph, so please leave me any idea you think you do this in a story impressive. Sci Fi would be the preferred gender suggestive, but all they have is great. Thank you very much!
Do not go through that door, Lily. Do not go through the door, she could hear the voices in your head talking to her. It was not supposed even to be there. She knew it was wrong, but it was too tempting. She grabbed the handle door with wet hands, the brass knob was cold to the touch. Slowly, she opened the door, trying to avoid all the noise. The door was open, without nothing but pitch black space that was before it. With a smile on his face hudge, Lily walked in. I can not italisize here.
Well, first, much of the grammar and spelling mistakes everywhere. Secondly, it is interesting but needs work. I believe that not going through that door, Lily. Do not go out the door. In if in italics, since technically it is a thought that the hearing in his head. Do not go through the door, Lily. Do not go through the door. . . Frantic voices heard in his head telling him not to go through the door. She knew it was wrong, that she should not be there, but she was tempted by the * door to explain here ex. Standing large, solid black door before *. She grasped the handle of the bronze door with wet hands. I could feel the freshness runs through your hand. Slowly opened the door, trying to avoid any possible noise (or any other noise). Nothing more than a field of black space in front of it. With a big smile on his face, Lily (or she) walked in. It's not the best, but I have to leave in a hurry! Write me if you want more opinions:. Editing know I can not emphasis here but did not specify whether it was in your question, so I was not sure if he had done or not. By the way, take my issue with a grain of salt. I never had time to write OK, but now that I read it lol I do not do that great. But still, I think it's good, just watch out for spelling mistakes. Good luck: PS> No have written a lot, but you've got me hooked)
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